Friday, August 31, 2018

DLO maths



This is my post on  time series graph.
A time series graph is commonly used to show if things make improvements over the years.
I found this task hard and confusing at first,I did not get it at all but I tried and got through now its a bit easier but I still need a little help.
I think I think i need to work on making this type of graphs more often.
I hope you enjoyed and see you next time bye!!!

Tuesday, August 28, 2018


This is my blog about my work.
For my work I did a review on the book diary of the wimpy kid.
I found this task fun and easy to do.
I liked that the novel is about a kid that writes in his diary and gave a personal opinion in every sentence.
I think I can work on opening up to other Francis because i love this book hope you do as well
Hope you enjoyed and see you at my next blog post and please comment on my work.
Bye !!!

my reading experience


this is my review on the diary of the wimpy kid i found this task fun and easy,the book was fun to read and i really enjoyed that the author did't make the book all serious but instead made it funny and cool to read i think i could work on being open other novels because i really enjoyed this book and i always thought it was dumb but i was wrong please comment on my work and i hope you enjoyed bye !!!!!

Tuesday, August 21, 2018

procedure writing

last week room 9 has been learning about procedural writing

Our LO was: to write a procedure for a simple task 

Our Success criteria was:
Has to be a simple direct statement 
Broken into steps 
Easy to follow 
Equipment 
Title 
Number your steps 
Action words 

Here is a link to my procedure

This is the Success criteria that I worked with put into a DLO so that you can view and get a better understanding of how to write a good procedure or instructions.

 
 I found this easy and simple to do and i think you would be able to do this yourself I think i need to work on making more steps so its even easier to follow. I also need to make sure I refer back to the Success criteria as this will help me focus my work.

I would like to see your comments to see if this helped you or not.

Monday, August 20, 2018

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1agWUJfOqrEI8B2t3vgUh3AcDIPgH6vIqP6BiT-QxGlM/edit#
this my writing it was really hard hope you enjoy